English Assignment

給高二4的孩子們,

上週發下的功課,請大家分別連結到以下兩個網站
(1)第一個為http://www.nmcnews.org/mind.html
請email給我,告訴我這女孩的轉動方向是順時針(clock-wise)還是逆時針(counter-clockwise)?
(2)第二個為 http://ftp.ccccd.edu/lipscomb/16_week_course/brain_lab.htm
將測試結果列印出來交給我喔!

別忘了兩樣功課due date都是1月2日

Jen and Ken's Wedding Anniversary

Today is our 7th wedding anniversary. We decided to celebrate it with a romantic dinner(with my sister!!!) Originally, the Italian restaurant "Florence" flashed into my mind. But since today is Christmas Eve and we didn't make any reservation, there wasn't any seat available. As a result, we had no choice but to choose a steak house. To our surpise, the only meal we could order was the "Christmas Special" and it was extremely expensive!!! Well, getting married on Christmas Eve might not be a right decision! But what's good about it is that we'll never forget our wedding anniversary!

創意指數(Creativity Self-assessment)

To 高二4同學們,
別忘了連結下列網站,測測你的創意指數喔!一定要做,我會抽考當中的關鍵單字喔!做完時,別忘了將最後一頁印下來,帶到學校交給我!OK!

http://www.creax.com/csa/frame.asp?session=zero

Auction Part II

今天的拍賣會,居然有人以$100買下Jay Chou的海報,而且聽說還是別班同學要的,讓我當場傻眼!Strong這組最後真的有拿到這100元嗎?很好奇吔!周董的魅力真有這麼大???

瓊雅&創厚結婚了! Congratulations!

上 上週去參加我大學社團同學的婚禮,新郎,新娘和我在同一個社團2年,新娘還是我高中同學,但卻已有7年不見了!在喜宴上遇到了好多當年社團同學,我卻將 很多人的名字都忘了,似乎我記人的速度很快,但新的名字會將舊朋友的名字擠出我的腦容量!別人記得我的名字,我卻叫不出他的實在是很尷尬!我們這一屆因為 電機系特多,所以好多人都在IC設計產業工作!在我出國的那幾年,好多人都結婚了,第一次見到他們的另一半,感覺很有趣!

Auction

英文課讓你們進行拍賣活動,很多人的共襄盛舉,各組的用心,表現得比我想像的好!尤其是上台介紹產品的同學& showboy...都很賣力,英文也講得好好!沒想到有政育簽名的聖誕卡居然可以賣到30元,胖虎難道是...不過,我很喜歡這個創意喔!
賣糖果的第一組,還用心準備了發票(invoice),收據(receipt),謝卡(thank-you note),不錯喔!
明天將舉行Auction part II,期待其餘各組的表現!

段考成績出爐嘍!

Dear二4孩子們,
這次段考有好多同學居然能大起大落到這個程度,真是令人嘆為觀止!這次我們班在未加權前,進到全校前40名的有10位(上次是6位),有進步喔!看能不能 下次再多擠下一些6班的同學!各科表現突出的同學也要多幫助其他同學學習的訣竅!聽說胖虎以後放學某一天會留下教同學物理,真是令人感動!我喜歡你們一起 切磋功課的感覺~(就算只是假象...其實是在抄作業...)
一群人一起去福利社每天下午必播出,聚在一起研究功課的畫面,我可是百看不厭喔!

終於拿到了3000塊!

親愛的二4孩子們,
我昨天就從學務主任那得知我們得到那3000元獎金了!我超開心的!記得昨天中午你們睡醒時我跑到教室去嗎?其實好想去告訴你們這個消息!但看你們睡得那麼熟,決定等今天頒獎時,再給你們驚喜!所以我悶了好久吔!
Anyway,這個榮譽是大家努力得來的,尤其是默默付出的同學,我都看在眼裡!有幾個同學還熱心地整理休息區,隨時都在注意整潔,得到生活競賽第一名,是我最欣慰的!
你們真的好棒!

難忘的33歲生日 Part Two

必榮,
感謝你的提醒,我忘了你在我夾排球前有跟我說生日快樂~忘記了啦!太感激啦!
可能是你在趣味競賽時的動作實在太可愛了,還有"帥田"老師的動作太好笑,所以我笑到忘記了啦!^^

204校慶照片

親愛的204孩子們,
校慶照片我已經upload上去嘍!
點選下列連結即可(一共有3頁,我會陸續將所有校慶拍的上傳)!
想給評論的話記得趕快註冊成facebook的會員喔!

http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=21049&l=42308&id=534126769

運動會進場大賽

感謝幸怡老師幫我們全程錄影,才讓全高二進場都留下了記錄!瀅加老師不但扮相佳,上場時也好賣力!琪圓老師穿mm穿,也好可愛!
最令我佩服的是必榮,雖然未親眼見到,但錄影帶裏看到時,仍是一陣震懾!

難忘的33歲生日!

給我的Ken Hong,
你是6:50被我叫醒,逼著跟我說生日快樂的人!
給305珮玲,文瑜,俋如,宜君,兆鵬...
你們是最早跟我說生日快樂的學生!
給前高一3的學生們....
你們是第一群對著我唱生日快樂的人,而跑來湊熱鬧的306同學所提供的沖天炮,讓我有生以來第一次對著一支鞭炮許願
給智捷,
謝謝你獻唱了一首歌給我,唱得好棒喔!也因此導致好多我沒教的學生都跟我說生日快樂,我想這就是忠明學生很可愛之處!
給我最愛的204學生們...
你們在跑完接力賽後,帶著未能拿到第一名的遺憾,居然偷偷跑回教室佈置生日party,我還以為你們難過到跑回教室哭哩!沒想到一開教室門,我真的被你們 嚇到了!超級感動的!這是我教書以來,第一次有學生幫我過生日吔!到底是哪位負責唱歌的,實在令我很佩服,唱得好棒!你們真的好可愛!

其實我是很低調的..所以今天收到這麼多的生日祝福,真的很尷尬,但真的很謝謝你們!

今天去看了"帥田"老師的無名網誌,發現很多很有趣的留言,哈....而且貴文老師怎麼有這麼多的綽號啊???

For my students:
Take a look at the following report! Hope that it will be useful when you decide your major.

高學歷很可能是高失業率，不過，選對七大行業，碩博士照樣吃香喝辣！調查指出，非碩士不用的行業，包括產業研究、証券分析，財務工程、風險控管，人力資源、教育訓練，生物資訊醫學，科技研發，科技法務，以及外商公司的行銷企劃。（張雅惠報導）

大學以上學歷的失業率，最近十年來呈現倍數成長，去年平均百分之四點三六，第一次和高中職的失業率相當；去年七月到今年七月，十三個月當中，就有八個月，大學以上的失業率，高於高中職的失業率。

Career 就業情報調查，台灣高學歷化最顯著的產業，首推科技、金融、以及儲備幹部；碩士學歷幾乎是雇用門檻的七大職位是：產業研究人員、証券分析師，財務工程、風 險控管人員，人力資源規劃、教育訓練人員，生物資訊、生物醫學人員，科技研發工程師，科技法務、智慧財產人員、專利工程師，外商行銷企劃、以及科技公司國 際業務。

就業情報調查，國內大學過度擴張，碩士產出數量是十年前的三倍，博士是十年前的兩倍，高學歷的人力供給過剩，量變造成質變，以及產業供給失衡，新聞傳播碩博士從熱門變成冷門，以及高學歷者自視甚高，都是造成高學歷喪失就業競爭優勢的原因。

徵才Ｍ型化 近半畢業生失業

To all my students,

I kept reminding you all of the fierce competition in our society. I do hope that you can all realize that and try your best to enter a prestigious university!!!

當你自大學、研究所畢業，要投多少履歷表才找到工作？根據人力銀行的調查，「前段班」學校只要丟五張履歷表就有工作，「後段班」學校要丟五十張，還有人丟出兩百九十張。調查並顯示，二十四％的社會新鮮人連面試機會都沒有，求職也趨向「Ｍ型化」。

台灣社會Ｍ型化，求職新鮮人感受最直接，好學校、熱門科系學生工作更好找；冷門學校、科系學生則愈來愈難找工作，待遇落差愈來愈明顯。

後段班 連面試機會都沒有

根據主計處公布的資料，七月共有十萬六千名「初次尋職者」失業，人數創歷來新高，這群剛畢業或剛退伍、首度邁入職場的社會新鮮人，等於有近一半的畢業生失業中。

根據一一一一人力銀行對今年投入職場的退伍者進行調查，有三成五的社會新鮮人「信心滿滿」，只丟出五分以下的履歷表，卻有一成的人，丟出五十多分履歷表；另一項調查顯示，有二十四％的新鮮人連面試機會都沒有。

一一一一人力銀行副總經理吳睿穎表示，那一成丟出五十多分履歷表的人，多半來自排名較後面的學校，很多企業一看到是後段班學校的畢業生，就「直接delete（刪除）掉」，甚至還有企業反應：「不要寄給我那些學校的履歷表好不好。」

好科系 還沒畢業就被綁

好學校、好科系的學生，未畢業就被好幾個工作「綁」住了。台大電機系系主任胡振國表示，台大電機系群的畢業生很受歡迎，包括平均每人有兩、三個工作機會，「很少聽過沒工作的」；今年學校曾辦過一次企業集體徵才，三十多家企業到台大擺攤求才，從鴻海、台積電、友達到聯發科，叫得出名字的一線大廠都到齊，還有十多個單位，如工研院，到台大辦活動順便徵才。

今年好慘 撞上「完美風暴」

但許多「後段班」學校的資通訊畢業生，就沒這麼好運了。萬寶華資深經理鍾宗良指出，他負責某家大型外商半導體公司的人才派遣業務，這家公司只要台、清、交、成四大名校以及從國外留學回來的學生，四年來只有一個例外：一位來自龍華大學的學生，還是因為他擔任過派遣，證明自己的能力，這家半導體才破格錄用。

台灣中小企業協會副理事長林廷芳表示，台灣從經濟成長、教育制度、人才供需都有結構性問題，所有後果都在今年呈現，可稱為「完美風暴」。今年的社會新鮮人，就直直撞上這股「完美風暴」。

一○四人力銀行公關經理方光瑋指出，今年已開始上班的社會新鮮人，有高達八成早從畢業之前就開始求職行動，顯示社會新鮮人的「憂患意識」。

一○四人力銀行在八月底調查社會新鮮人就業現況，高達七成企業今年以來曾雇用沒有工作經驗的社會新鮮人，但三個月試用期後，只有十四％的企業表示新鮮人全員留任至今。

Happy Moon Festival!

Time really flies. I can't believe that the holiday is coming to an end. I went to a restaurant called "銀河的鐵道" in Yuanlin(員林) yesterday. There we got to take a close look at the High Speed Railway. If I were the resident there, I probaby couldn't stand the noise.
The restaurant was crowded with people. Whenever the train passed, everyone gave out a cry of joy. I also took some pictures. I'll post them on "Facebook".

Wonderful songs!

To all my students:
I'd like to share two songs with you. I heard one of them from ICRT. Both of the songs are sung by Lene Marlin. Please check the following website link. If you want the lyrics, use any kind of search engine. You'll be able to get the lyrics easily.

"Another Day"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JhpLRT_t34

"Unforgivable Sinner"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4T24Md5patA&mode=related&search=


Hope you'll like them!!! And don't forget to memorize words like "unforgivable" & "sinner". :)

Album of Class 204

To Class 204,
I'd like to keep track of all our class events through pictures. If you want to check them, please click on the following public link or register at "Facebook" and don't forget to add me to your friend list. I hope that I can have your feedback written in English. OK!

http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=13103&l=7cfea&id=534126769

Welcome back to the real world!

To my senior 3 students:
It's wonderful to see you back at school! I believe that you all had a wonderful time during the trip. What a pity I couldn't go with you! I'd like to thank "Class 305" & "宛靜,佩儒" for bringing me souvenirs. They are really tasty.
Now it's time for you to pay more attention to your studies. Since we are behind schedule, you'll have to be more attentive in class.

Have a nice trip!

To all my senior 3 students~
May you have a wonderful field trip in the following three days! And don't forget to take more photos and send them to me so that I can post them on "Facebook".
Have fun and take care!!!

I haven't updated my blog for over a month. During the summer vacation, I've been experiencing some wonderful events, but in the meantime, Ken and I have gone through some terrible incidents. If I find time, I'll write them all down.
For the coming semester, I believe I'll be extremely busy. Hope that all my students can do your best to get the most satisfying test results. And most importantly, I do hope that I can get along well with my new class 204.

For 所有的親朋好友,
原先貼的連結搞錯了,重新再貼上正確的連結,不需成為facebook的會員,就可以瀏覽照片喔!
不過,仍歡迎大家註冊Facebook,成為我的朋友群,上頭有我生活中可愛的朋友與學生們的照片喔!
連結網址為:

http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=12184&l=c8804&id=534126769

Jenny & John回臺灣打工

For Senior 2 Students
L5翻譯考題
1.這班飛機可能會誤點二十分鐘 Chances are (that) the flight will be twenty minutes late.
2.你做的努力愈多,你成功的機會愈大 The more effort you make, the more likely it will be for you to succeed.
3.為了要成為好秘書,她很努力去增進她的語言能力 She works hard to sharpen up her language skills in order to become a good secretary.
4.他們可以按照你的英文程度,替你安排一些課程 They can arrange some courses for you according to your English level.
5.我想訂一間雙人房 I would like to reserve a double room.

For Senior 2 Students
L4翻譯考題
1.我父親因公而不在國內 My father is out of the country on business.
2.我每天大約花一小時練習講英文 I spend an hour or so practicing speaking English every day.
3.那位慈愛的母親親了一下小女孩的前額 The kind mother kissed the little girl on the forehead.
4.想要取悅每個人是沒有用的 It is no use trying to please everyone.
5.別擔心,有其他的旅館可以待的 Don't worry. There are other hotels to stay in.
6.在那個湖裏住了一隻怪獸 In the lake lives a monster.
7.正在和李先生講話的那個男孩是新來的 The boy who is talking to Mr. Lee is new here.
8.你應該親自向她道歉 You should apologize to her in person.
9.我在想你是否可以借我一千元 I am wondering if you could lend me one thousand dollars.
10.地上現在是濕的,昨天必定下了雨 The ground is wet; it must have rained yesterday.

For Senior 2 Students~
第二課翻譯考題
1.要不是有一筆貸款(loan),我不可能開創事業 If it had not been for a loan, I couldn't have started my career.
2.要不是那些義工的幫忙,這些傷患無法得到妥善的照顧 The injured could not have been taken good care of but for the help of the volunteers.
3.我在半夜的時候被地震搖醒,嚇個半死 I was awakened by an earthquake in the middle of the night, feeling scared to death.
4.一位勇敢的男士冒著生命危險去救那位溺水(drowning)的小孩 A brave man risked his life to rescue the drowning child.
5.你越看生活的光明面,你就越快樂 The more you look at the bright side of life, the happier you will be.

I had planned to go on a trip during the Dragon Boat Festival. But... as usual, I stayed at home. I played Wii, slept 14 hours a day, completed 9 test papers.... Well...I'm going crazy. I do need a vacation. So, I called my best friend in Taipei and arranged a trip during the summer vacation!!! Kenting! Here we come!!!

Have you ever heard of "Toast Master Club"? There is one near our school. It's a club where members are required to make a speech and evaluate the speakers. They meet twice every month, the 2nd and 4th Wednesday. Last Wednesday, one teacher from Viator Senior High School invited me to join their club. I did go and observe how they delivered speeches and gave speakers feedback. Many of the members do not major in English, but they are not afraid of speaking English. Even though they don't speak fluent English, they all try hard to deliver their messages in English. I was pretty impressed. I'm thinking about joining the club next semester. It's a great place for me to practice making a speech.

終於拿到Friends第十季,暑假待我研究完後,再選適當的段落給大家看嘍!但前提是,課得先趕完哩!聽說Desperate Housewives也很好看,只好再花一筆錢去買嘍!

I had dinner with a couple of students last night. I want to let you know that I had a great time even though the beef noodles didn't taste that good.

Finally, I've finished filing my tax return. And to my delight, I can get around eight thousand dollars as a refund. Hooray!!!

To Class 103,
I want to let you know that I really hate to be your homeroom teacher! I never encountered this kind of problem before. And I felt depressed.
Should a student wear a uniform to school? There has always been a fierce debate over this issue. But before the authority concerned come to a conclusion, I, as a teacher, will keep asking my students to follow the school's regulations. You can show your creativity in all sorts of school events. But you didn't. You kept giving me all kinds of excuses. But did you realize that originally you could only wear the school's sports wear?
Well, I kept thinking about all the conflicts we had over this issue. And I still want to stick to my principle. I do hope that Chung-ming can be a place with good discipline. But I really don't know how long I can hang on.

My Favorite Place on Campus (高二6 依婷)
As a student, I spend most of my time at school. Therefore, school is just like my second home. When I have a good mood, I like to chat with my friends or teachers, but if I'm disappointed, sometimes I will go to a special place which can make me feel comfortable and relaxed.
I like to stand in the shade of a tree and look at the sky. There is a chair beside the playground and that is the special place which can release my stree. When I look up to the sky, I always imagine that I were a kite, flying high in the sky. At this moment I can feel the sunshine, the great atmosphere make me delighted and also add joy to my simple school life.
Sometimes we will feel disappointed or unhappy, but it's really important to release our stress. Sitting on the chair at my special place is a good way for me to be happy and to always look at the bright side of my life, because the sunshine makes me feel like hope and happiness. Therefore, I like to stay at school, especially in my special place.

我的朋友去年同時和我一起從曉明請辭,我來到忠明,她則是專心準備研究所,結果努力半年的時間,她考上了靜宜,中興,逢甲,彰師大!!!所有她報名的學校都考上了!真是太厲害了!!!
從辭職到考前,她都處在徬徨的狀態,不知未來何去何從!畢竟在曉明待了四年,原本是有穩定的收入的!但她也知道不跳脫那個環境,是很難準備考試的!
所以她勇敢地做了!而且全力以赴了!現在她有了全新的開始!
人生,真的可以有很多條路走!但不管走那一條,都要專心一意,一定會達到目標!我深深地如此相信...

I attended the annual meeting yesterday. But it was a mess. Some residents had a fierce debate over a lawsuit. Some residents were just there gossiping about their kids. Well... As a result, nothing was settled.
I won't attend that kind of meeting any more. And I'm now wondering whether I should purchase an apartment.

Nancy回美國去了,她告訴我Chenbro的一些人事變化...有趣的是,我看了也沒有太大的心情變化,Kent被升遷去管歐洲分公司, Anthony回台灣管理總公司,well...這些人,這些事,似乎都已離我很遠,沒感覺了...以前聽到時總還有些心情波動,現在看來我己經走出那些 恩恩怨怨了...Good for me!!!

These two weeks, I've been busy handling some parking issues! We had a big fight with our downstair neighbor. Last night, he used his car to block my way out. As a result, I had to call the police. Two police officers came to help. Finally, he opened his door. We had a fierce argument. But he still insisted that he didn't do anything wrong. Ridiculous!!!
Anyway, the police officers asked him to move his car and he did.
This Sunday, I'll be attending the annual meeting of our community. Hope that we can settle all the issues by next week.

1. A Accidentally y, I met my elementary school teacher in the concert.

2. Adam: Is there any p possibility y for them to win the game? Luke: Why not? They are good players.

3. My father, as a pilot, n navigates es the boat into the harbor.

4. When people are in a fire, they are usually too nervous to find access to e escape e.

5. Steve went hiking yesterday and got s stung g by a bee on the arm.

6. The witness gave a detailed d description n of the car accident, which happened on the highway.

7. Some companies a advertise e their new products by giving away free samples on the street.

8. This painting is only a copy; the o original l is preserved in the museum.

9. A red rose is often a s symbol l for love and romance.

10. We all felt great ad admiration n for the five-year-old girl who stayed calm in such an urgent situation.

11. After we completed this difficult task, we felt a sense of ac achievement t.

12. Every c citizen n in this country has right to vote for the president candidate.

13. Power f failure e would be easily caused if too many electronic facilities were turned on at the same time.

14. In a hard time without hope, people long for a m miracle e to survive.

15. Usually kids are full of e enthusiasm m about interesting things.

16. For architects, building the tallest building in the world is really a big c challenge e.

這個結果似乎是以上所有各種原因的結合。（combination_)

The result seems to be combination of all the above reasons.

有時候，有些鯨魚的聲納導航出了問題，而失去了方向感。（sonar navigation）

Sometimes, some whales have problems with their sonar navigation and lose their sense of direction.

當他衝進著火的房子救小女孩時，他完全沒有意識到危險。

When he rushed into the burning house to save the little girl, he wasn’t aware of danger.

如果你必須從窗戶逃生，不要急忙地跳出窗戶。

If you must escape through a window, don’t hastily jump out of the window.

保持鎮定，你就可以增加被營救的機會。（increase your chances）

You will increase your chances of being rescued if you stay calm.

他的研究對社會有很大貢獻。

His study makes a great contribution to/toward society.

這位老人需要的不是錢，而是家人的關懷。

What the old man needed was not money but the care from his family

一般人相信空氣汙染是造成這個神祕疾病的原因。

It is believed that air pollution was responsible for the mysterious disease.

如果萬一發生火災，我們應該立刻打電話求助。

If a fire should happen, we should call for help immediately.

不管我有多累，我上床前一定會寫日記。

No matter how tired I am, I never fail to keep a diary before going to bed.

不論你做什麼事，耐心是成功的祕訣。

No matter what you do, patience is the secret of success. (key to success)

有個女孩和媽媽吵架而翹家,漫無目的在陌生的城市裏閒逛,就當她又餓又累時,一個好心的老闆娘請她吃了碗麵
她的內心充滿了感激,流著淚向老闆娘訴苦
老闆娘卻回答她: "孩子,回家去吧!!! 我不過煮了一碗麵,你就對我萬分感激,但你的媽媽為了你煮過無數次的晚餐,你是否心中也有一絲感動或感恩呢?"
.....

我朋友跟我分享的故事,我聽了很感動,也時時提醒自己,媽媽在嘮叨的時候,就順著她的意吧!!!人似乎真的很犯賤,習以為常的關愛就不懂得珍惜...

小男孩用他的彈珠換了一把生鏽的刀，但立刻又後悔了
The little boy traded his marbles for a rusty knife, but he felt regret before long.

如果當時你更仔細些就不會犯如此愚蠢的錯誤了
If you had been more careful then, you wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.

瑪麗亞寧願單身也不願嫁給她不愛的人
Maria would rather stay single than marry someone she does not love.

他們寧可冒險也不願坐著等死
They would rather take a chance than sit and wait to die.

假如昨天沒下雨,宴會就不會取消
If it had not rained yesterday, the party would not have been called off.

假如他沒開得那麼快,他就不會死於車禍
If he had not been driving so fast, he would not have been killed in the accident.

一位人際關係良好的經理會受到員工的喜歡
A manager with good people skills will be liked by his employees.

情緒智商是我們天生就有的或是沒有的呢?
Is EQ something that we are born with or without?

同理心就是想像自己處在別人的立場的能力
A sense of empathy is the ability to imagine what it is like to be in someone else’s shoes.

我們不可能總是控制自己對焦慮的反應
It is unlikely that we can always control our reactions to anxiety.

你應該努力改進自己(work toward)
You should work toward improving yourself.

Study harder, and you will succeed!!!

B4 L12
1. 根據傳說,排灣人(Paiwan)是由太陽光孕育而生(bring to life)
According to legend, the Paiwan people were brought to life by the light of the sun.
2.由於這個原因,排灣人至今仍然視(think of)百步蛇為精神伙伴
Because of this, the Paiwan still think of the hundred-pace snake as a spiritual partner today.
3. 據報導,警方已經找回(recover)那件獨特的祖傳陶壼(It…)
It was reported that the police had recovered the unique ancestral clay pot.
4. 正是撒古流(Sakuliu)重新發現(rediscover)這項尊貴的文化遺產(It…)
It was Sakuliu who rediscovered this revered cultural heritage.
5. 等他26歲時,他已經是個很有前途的藝術家(By…)
By the time he was 26, he already had a promising future as an artist.
6. 那兩位台灣原住民(native Taiwanese)唱歌如此好聽令我們不禁大為讚賞
Those two native Taiwanese sang so beautifully that we couldn’t help but marvel.
7. 儘管我以前已經見過她幾次,我還是沒認出她(despite)
I didn’t recognize her despite having met her several times before(despite the fact that I had met her …).

Well...句子有點多...but習作就這麼多題吔...Do your best!!!

B5 Lesson 1

在英文寫作中,段落就是一群關於同一主題的句子
In English writing, a paragraph is a group of sentences about the same topic.

組織的意思就是將句子依邏輯的順序排好
Organization means arranging these sentences in a logical order.

如此一來,段落的一致性和連貫性就可以確定得到
In this way(Thus), the unity and coherence in(of) the paragraph can be ensured.

最後別忘了要修改你的草稿
Finally don't forget to revise your first draft.

修改的時候,你再怎麼小心也不為過
When revising, you cannot be too careful.

大家加油嘍!!!

今天是4月的最後一天,也是我力行心死運動的第一天,成效似乎不錯...
這是我的第一個blog,就用來紀念也是見證我努力獨立的日子吧...